fifteen_half ([info]fifteen_half) wrote,
@ 2008-06-03 12:36:00
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Title: ( in the process of thinking  of a proper title )Tightrope
Pairing: None. Hankyung-centric.
Genre: General
Rating: PG-13


"This," Zhou Mi said, motioning to the child he was carrying, "is Kyuhyun. He's a bit shy at first, but if you're good, he'll be warming up to you, as would the rest of the children, in no time."

Walking, Zhou Mi began to point the children he was going to keep an eye on. "The two playing at the back with the tin foil hats are Eunhyuk and Donghae. Donghae insists that aliens exist and he's got the other boy believing that too. I don't want you to tell them they're just a figment of his imagination, okay? Let the children believe what they want to. Eunhyuk is a rather gullible boy, so please be careful of your words, okay, gege?

"The two sitting on the tables are Kangin and Eeteuk. Eeteuk is the eldest of all of them. Whenever I need to go somewhere for a while or answer the phone, he's the one I ask to look out for the rest of the children while I'm gone. If you ever hear anyone of them call someone umma, then that would be Eeteuk. Kangin, on the other hand, is a bit hard to handle. He likes playing pranks and likes to tease other children, especially Eunhyuk, so keep an eye out for that. But, if it's too much, you can get Eeteuk to stop him. I don't know why, but Kangin listens to every word he says."

Zhou Mi paused in his talking as he set Kyuhyun down in front of the game consoles. Turning to Hankyung, he explained, "Kyuhyun likes to play games. Plus, he almost always wins against anyone." Zhou Mi smiled and ruffled Kyuhyun's hair before pointing at the two other boy's sitting near them, "That is Shindong and the one with the pink hair is Sungmin. They've been stuck together even before they came here, I heard. Although when they did come here, they've started talking with other kids. Their parents keep on thanking me for that, although I don't think I've done anything to stimulate that change at all."

Walking around again, Hankyung noticed three boys huddled in the corner. The one in the middle seemed to do all the talking, the one on the left seemed bored and the other one was smiling and laughing along with whatever the boy in the middle said. Zhou Mi must have noticed his gaze because he said, "Ah, gege, you've found him."

Brows raised, Hankyung asked, "Him?"

"Kim Heechul. He's the one I wanted to warn you about. His tantrums are the worst so be careful, okay? No one's been able to stop those until he gets what he wants. The other two at his side are Kibum and Shiwon. Shiwon's a little gentleman. But everyone else picks on him for that. He doesn't really mind, though. Kibum is...well, he's quiet most of the time. He and Kyuhyun would sometimes just sit in a corner watching everyone else run around. There are times though, that he can be as wicked as Kangin or as loud as Heechul."

Chuckling, Zhou Mi said, "They're Heechul's little minions, as Kangin would say. Although both Kibum and Shiwon have been able to stop Heechul's tantrums before but only on occasion, that is. Other than that, practically no one has ever did. Some employees have quit solely because of Heechul. Some because of Kangin. Most others resigned because of everyone in general."

Hankyung doesn't know what to say to that. So he shook his head before he asked, "Wait, everyone? Half of them don't seem so bad."

Zhou Mi laughed at him and waved a hand as if to say 'you-don't-know-what-you're-talking-about', "Oh, gege. Just you wait and see. Still, I'm hoping you'd be able to endure everything. You've always been so patient, yeah?"

Frowning, Hankyung replied, "The way you mentioned it, it seems I'm gonna have a hard time keeping patient." Sighing, he said, "But I can always try, I guess."

Zhou Mi nodded and smiled, "Well, that's all we can do, I believe." Moving towards the couches Zhou Mi continued, "The one on the left is Ryeowook. He's a bit shy when someone new comes but the boy can really, really, sing. Yesung's quiet most of the time but the children say he isn't. I haven't really seen him loud before but maybe that's just me."

And then, smiling widely, Zhou Mi patted Hankyung's back and said, "Well then! I've finished the introductions! Now it's time to start your job. I'll be over at the other side in case you need help."

"Wait, am I the only one doing this? Isn't there anyone else?"

Hankyung's heart fell the moment he saw Zhou Mi shake his head, "I'm sorry, Geng-gege. I'd help you, really. But we're a bit short on employees and someone needs to take care of the toddlers. And besides," Zhou Mi said, smiling widely again, "They're all pretty grown up! You only need to make sure they're distracted enough not to fight or pull pranks on each other. They can take care of themselves pretty well, you know."

"Okay. But if something happens, I can--,"

"Of course. Now go introduce yourself, okay? I'm sure you'll do fine. You're Hangeng, after all."

Hankyung wanted to ask what that had to do with anything but Zhou Mi had already turned back and headed outside. Looking around, Hankyung sighed and thought, 'What have I gotten myself into?'

---

And then, all of a sudden, Hankyung realized It's been weeks since he began working at the childcare center. The pay was good. It was really, really, really good. But somehow, Hankyung found himself thinking if it's still worth the torture.

Sighing, he looked at Donghae who was, for the nth time this week, tugging at the hem of his shirt.

Smiling down, he asked, "Yes, Donghae?"

Hearing his name, Donghae brightened immediately and smiled wide, "Nothin'! I just wanted to make sure you still remembered my name."

Donghae skipped away after that, sat down beside Kibum and listened intently to whatever Heechul and Shiwon were arguing about. Hankyung shook his head as he watched Donghae. The boy was good, really. But he was pretty weird. Ever since he had come, the boy had been asking him if he knew his name, if he still remembered him, if the name 'Donghae' rang any bells, or if Hankyung had started to forget him. The constant questions concerned him but now... Right now, he had Shindong to take care of.

Kneeling down to face the chubby boy, he said, "Shindong, I'm sorry but I can't let you eat the snacks yet. They're saved for the afternoon. And you won't be waiting much for long anyway."

Seeing a pout about to come, Hankyung quickly said, "But you know, Shindong. It's okay for me to let you eat the snacks."

Immediately upon hearing that, Shindong's face lit up. Smiling brightly, he cheered, "Really, hyung?! You'll let me eat them?!"

Ruffling Shidong's hair affectionately, Hankyung replied, "Of course! But."

"But?"

"Well," Hankyung began, tilting his head sideways as if considering things, "I can only allow you to eat. The rest would have to wait."

"Oh! That's okay, hyung! Most of them probably aren't hungry! Not at all! So it's okay if I'm the only one eating. Right, Sungminie?"

Instead of agreeing, Sungmin frowned at Shindong. "You don't have to eat all the time, Shindong. You're not even hungry! And hyung," he said, looking at Hankyung disapprovingly, "You shouldn't let him eat! Zhou Mi-hyung never allowed Shindong to eat ahead of us. And besides, Shindong's parents have asked Zhou Mi-hyung to not let Shindong eat when the rest doesn't! You're gonna get in trouble if Zhou Mi-hyung or Shindong's parents find out!"

Shindong, who had been trying in vain to keep Sungmin's mouth shut, frowned at his friend too, "Aish, Sungmin! I won't tell Zhou Mi-hyung or my parents! So Hankyung-hyung, it's okay, really! I promise, promise, promise that I won't tell anyone!"

Smiling inwardly, Hankyung tried to arrange the expression on his face to look terribly confused. Scratching his chin as if in thought, Hankyung began, "Well, as long as Shindong doesn't tell, then it's fine, I suppose."

That earned a loud cheer from Shindong. Sungim had shouted, "Yah, hyung! You really shouldn't do this!"

Smiling knowingly at Sungmin, Hankyung continued, "But since Zhou Mi can't know, and since we're trying to hide this from everyone, when the time for afternoon snack comes Shindong would have to lie and say he isn't hungry anymore."

Shindong's eyes widened the moment he heard that he'd have to lie about being full. "Wait! Why do I have to lie about me not being hungry?"

"Because we're trying to hide this, right? If I get more snacks from the kitchen and Zhou Mi passes by and sees me, he might ask me what I'm doing there. And what would I tell him then? I can't lie to Zhou Mi because Zhou Mi possess mind-reading powers. And I can't ask any one of you to get more because I'd get in trouble."

Standing up from his kneeling position, Hankyung smiles gently at Shidong, "But you want to eat now, don't you? So it's gonna be all right like that."

Sungmin, who wasn't as devastated as Shindong, realized quickly what Hankyung had been aiming for all along. Trying hard not to laugh, he patted Shindong's back and said, "After the snacks, it'll be almost time for our parents to pick us up. I don't think you'll get hungry that fast, right? Hankyung-hyung's really kind, Shindong. He's allowing you to eat before us! So just lie later about not being hungry and watch all of us eat instead."

The last five words of Sungmin's little skit shook Shindong hard.

"I'd have to...lie? Lie about being full while watching everyone else eat?"

Both Hankyung and Sungmin nodded solemnly at Shindong. Sighing as if in deject, Hankyung said, "I'm so sorry Shindong, to make you lie like this. But you really, really, really want to eat now, right?" Taking a step as if to get the snacks at the back, Hankyung continued, "So I'll just go and secretly get your share, okay?"

Hankyung hadn't had the chance to take another step after that.

"WAIT, HYUNG!!!"

Trying to contain the bubble of laughter that had come up, Hankyung coughed, "Yes, Shindong?"

"I'm okay! I'm still okay, really! I was just joking a while ago! I'm not hungry, I swear! Right, Sungmin?! I'll eat along with everyone, hyung! I swear!"

Facial expression fixed as if in concern, Hankyung asked, "Are you sure?"

Shindong didn't hesitate to say, "Yes, hyung! I'm sure!" to the amusement of Sungmin, who was trying to hold his giggles. When he'd calmed down, Sungmin sighed and smiled approvingly at Hankyung. Hankyung just winked back at him.

The problem with Shindong solved temporarily, Hankyung turned to everyone and began to accomplish the scheduled activities. As per schedule, Hankyung invited the children to play. Most of them had cheered and joined the game immediately. Others, like Kibum and Ryeowook, had taken a little bit of coaxing from him. After the games, he had let them rest while eating the prepared snacks. He began to tell a story at the end of the children's stay so that when he finished the story, each of the children's parents or guardians began picking them up.

Smiling contentedly as he watched Kangin being led outside by his father, Hankyung nodded at himself. It had been a terribly, terribly long and tiring day. But it had been fulfilling nevertheless.

"It's almost a month since you've started here, hyung."

Turning to Zhou Mi, Hankyung smiled, "Yeah."

Zhou Mi smiled widely at him in return, "I'm really glad you didn't quit, hyung. Most others have given up by now." Laughing, he continued, "See, didn't I tell you, hyung? You'd have no problems at all!"

Confused, Hankyung asked, "I still don't get what you mean by that. I'm just doing my job."

Hankyung didn't like Zhou Mi's knowing smile, "Yes. You're doing your job. But you are yourself while doing your job."

"Being myself? What has that got to do with anything?"

"Oh, you don't know?"

"If I knew," Hankyung said, frowning, "I wouldn't be asking, would I?"

Zhou Mi laughed. Starting to clean up the place, he remembered, "Oh, hyung, I almost forgot."

Picking up carelessly thrown toys, Hankyung looked at Zhou Mi, "What?"

"Someone's applied for a job here."

Pleasantly surprised, Hankyung smiled, "Really?! Someone's finally going to help with the kids?"

"Yup." Smiling widely yet again, Zhou Mi continued, "He's gonna start tomorrow."

"Tomorrow? What's his name?"

"Henry."

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[info]sugarwarrior
2008-06-03 04:51 pm UTC (link)
Oohhhhh HanGeng really is the most perfect person for this <3333 I.. I'd quote my favorite parts, but I'D BE QUOTING EVERYTHING D: And I don't want you to re-read your fic re-written/copied by someone else.. XDD Gods, I really love this♥
The way you portrayed the children are really fitting to the RL Super Junior members ♥
I really like how HanGeng and SungMin just... changed ShinDong's decision XD! It's really so cute *squishes*
And I totally squealed when I saw Henry's name 8DDD
aldfsjlasdfjjdf;lksaldjasf HENRY♥ Omg, I wonder what it'd be like? x3

Will this be a fic series? 8D<3

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 01:58 am UTC (link)
Hahaha! Thank you so much!!!

Hangeng + Sungmin, they are invincible! They could probably conquer the world!XD

Yes, Henry's coming! And yes, yes! This will be a series. I hope to post the next part later~

I'm very, very, very glad you liked it!!!<3

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[info]nihanhaekihyun
2008-06-03 06:57 pm UTC (link)
uwaa~~ this sounds interesting!! haha...

and Hankyung taking care of mini-suju?? i would love to see it!

aahhh...i'm in love with your Donghae. i know he was just briefly introduced, but kyaaa~ how cute!! ^_^

and Sungmin + Shindong = ♥

now, i want to see more. (Henry!! :D)

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 02:02 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

I've always wanted to see Hankyung taking care of everyone else, so instead of waiting, I just wrote one.XD And Donghae, you'll be seeing more of Donghae soon!

Hahaha! Sungmin + Shindong = love. I really love them together. They're so cute!

Thank you for reading!

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[info]virgo288
2008-06-03 09:24 pm UTC (link)
Good start! Can't wait to see more ^^

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 02:03 am UTC (link)
I was so unsure of this so I'm glad you thought it was good.<3

So, thank you!

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[info]kyouyafanatic
2008-06-03 09:32 pm UTC (link)
gah!!! i love this so much! the whole sungmin/shindong/hangeng/eating thing was so cute!!! hangeng is really the best person to do this... even though eeteuk is the leader. it doubles the cuteness amount when you play sjm's new song 'love song'. i was smiling the whole time!

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 02:05 am UTC (link)
Hahahaha! With Shindong, it just had to eating. And I just had to make Sungmin help! And I agree, Hangeng is one of the best people to do this.<3

Thank you! I'm glad it made you smile!!!

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[info]random_luv
2008-06-03 10:19 pm UTC (link)
omg the chinese boys working in a day care!
xDD
mini!suju is always a good plot for anything.
♥_♥ henry! what kind of twist will your presence bring?

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 02:10 am UTC (link)
Hahaha! I didn't realize it was the Chinese boys working until I finished it. And mini!suju would be a good plot for anything, which is why I did this, but they're so very hard to write.XD

Henry... Hmm. I'm still wondering myself. But he'll have his part, of course.:P

Thank you for reading!! Glad you liked it!<3

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[info]shinelikethesky
2008-06-03 11:17 pm UTC (link)
Oh that was so clever of Hankyung!

8D
I'm curious as to what happens next~

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 02:12 am UTC (link)
I'm very glad you liked it!!!<3

And thank you so much for reading and commenting! They always bring me so much happiness!

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[info]music_loner
2008-06-04 12:57 am UTC (link)
awe this is so cute
i love it a lot
ahh i love it

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 02:13 am UTC (link)
Hello! Hello!XD

So glad you read it and commented!! I'm very, very, very glad you liked it!<3

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[info]music_loner
2008-06-06 01:29 am UTC (link)
i loved it

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-06 10:16 am UTC (link)
I made two new chapters. I hope you liked them as well.XD

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[info]music_loner
2008-06-06 10:53 pm UTC (link)
i juat read all the new updates on miracle
i was so excited
and i commented
lol

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[info]shadowtailmon
2008-06-04 01:49 am UTC (link)
Yay! Most of them r cute lil kids X3 *tries to apply too* and with henry, everyone will be in it!!

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 02:15 am UTC (link)
If the kids are cute like that, even if they're so mischievous, I'd love to apply there as well! Hahahaha!XD

Thanks for reading! And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment! They always make my day! Thank you!<3

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[info]veiledstar
2008-06-04 05:56 am UTC (link)
YAYYYYY
I love the idea of suju running around as little kids

through the first few paragraphs i was like
"HENRY! HENRY! WHERE'S MY HENRY"
but of course you wouldn't have forgotten him(:

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 06:14 am UTC (link)
Oh, of course I wouldn't have forgotten Henry.<3

Thank you for leaving a comment! Comments make me so happy!

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[info]veiledstar
2008-06-04 06:34 am UTC (link)
*comment-thread-happy*

Any ideas for title yet?
And how'd you get the idea for this fic? :P

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 07:23 am UTC (link)
Hahaha!

Nope, no ideas for the title yet. Any suggestions?XD
How did I get the idea? Hmmm... I dunno, I just started writing and then, there it was!

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[info]veiledstar
2008-06-04 07:49 am UTC (link)
Mm;;
I think I'd have to know more of the story before I can think up of a uberinspirational title :D

How magical!~ :X

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-04 07:52 am UTC (link)
Hahahaha! Uberinspirational!XD

Ah~ I dunno. Even now, I still can't think of anything. Maybe I'll just go with a not-so inspirational one.XD Or anything that pops in my head that sounds good.

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[info]veiledstar
2008-06-05 02:31 am UTC (link)
Tightrope!
it's good :D
Reminds me of Hangeng's dancing ability

tightrope==>balance==>dancing==>yayy! :D

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-05 02:37 am UTC (link)
YAY!!! I'm glad the title sounds good!

Yes! Balance! The kids and Hangeng and Henry and Zhou Mi...they're all walking on a tightrope together. And because of that, they need to be able to keep on balancing with each other.

Good job! You guessed the meaning right!XD

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[info]veiledstar
2008-06-05 02:42 am UTC (link)
YAY! *feels smart*
The mental imagery of Hangeng carrying a bunch of little kids on his back and walking on a tightrope makes me want to laugh...let's hope he doesn't fall off x)

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[info]fifteen_half
2008-06-05 02:52 am UTC (link)
I'm hoping for that as well!

Now go read the second chapter and leave a comment! I wanna know what you think about it!XD

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[info]mardigrasmaven
2008-06-04 08:57 pm UTC (link)
GAH!! THEY'RE SO ADORABLE!! I LOVE IT!! And Geng the perfect guy for that job!!

Although I'm rather worried about Donghae too... him asking about everyone remembering his name so much is a bit strange...

Good job to Hangeng and Sungmin on straight up owning Shindong with the snacks. He never saw it coming! XD

And yay for Henry coming to work there too!!

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[info]azurehook
2008-06-06 06:31 pm UTC (link)
This is such a cool premise!! I love it already. It's something new and refreshing and I love the dynamics and personalities. Excited to read more ^_^ off to go read the next chappies~~

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[info]reverokameorih
2008-07-31 07:57 pm UTC (link)
8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I can't believe I never looked after this fanfic at all *shocked*
I loved every piece here and yaay for manny Hangeng x333~ <3
Awww, I sooo wanted to squish Hae...;3; *goes to red next chaps*

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